Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Revising Simple Sentences

We have been taking notes on prepositions, prepositional phrases, compound sentences, and complex sentences. This information should help you have better sentence variety in your writing. Below, you will see a few examples of simple sentences revised into compound and/or complex sentences.

Simple
Not Simple
I love apples
I love apples, and you love bananas
Maria loves limes.
Although she hates lemons, Maria loves limes.
Maria served punch.
Maria served punch because it is delicious, and it contains lime juice.



Using your notes, revise the following simple sentences into compound, complex, or compound-complex sentences. You do not need to write the simple sentence, only your revised version. When necessary, you can add prepositional phrases, too. When making your revisions, be sure to properly use commas. 
  1. Some students like to study in the mornings.
  2. Juan and Arturo play football every afternoon.
  3. They hope to play for HTHS.
  4. Alicia goes to the library and studies every day.
  5. She makes good grades.
  6. Marhsall and Allie play basketball.
  7. The players dribbled the basketball.
  8. The team won the game.
  9. They were very happy.
  10. The team ate ice cream at Dairy Queen. 

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