Comma Rules

As students continue drafting their mystery stories, we are covering comma rules. Starting today, we will cover 2-3 rules each day in class. Students should keep these notes handy to use as they draft and edit/revise their stories. They will be graded for their use of commas throughout the story. Students may be assessed on this information separately  in a few weeks. If you have misplaced your comma rules sheet, you can print a new one from the link below.

Comma Rules Notes

Adding Description

Mystery Story Pre-writing

Below is the link to the document we worked on in class on Monday and Tuesday. If you misplace your copy, you can print it out from here.

This link also has the ideas for character's appearance, personality, and other details.

Mystery Story Pre-Writing

Mysteries of Harris Burdick--Mystery Story Inspirations

We are beginning a new unit on "Mystery Writing" this week. Each student will choose one image from the "Mysteries of Harris Burdick" as inspiration for this writing assignment. Below, you will see several pictures from the "Mysteries of Harris Burdick." Choose one picture on which to base your mystery story. You will need to use the caption in your story.

Picture Title: The Third Floor Bedroom

 Caption:"It all began when someone left the window open..."

 Picture Title: The House on Maple

Caption: "It was the perfect lift off..."

 Picture Title: Missing the Venice

Caption: "Even with her mighty engines in reverse, the ocean liner was pulled further and further into the canal..."

 Picture Title: Oscar and Alphonse

Caption: "She knew it was time to send them back. The caterpillars softly wiggled in her hand, spelling out 'goodbye.' " 

 Picture Title: Uninvited Guests

Caption: "His heart was pounding. He was sure he had seen the doorknob move..."

 Picture Title: Archie Smith, Boy Wonder

Caption: "A tiny voiced asked, 'Is he the one?' "

 Picture Title: A Strange Day in July

Caption: "He threw with all his might, but the stone came skipping back..."

 Picture Title: The Seven Chairs

Caption: "The fifth one ended up in France..."

 Picture Title: The Harp

Caption: "So it's true, he thought, it's really true..."

 Picture Title: Another Place, Another Time

Caption: "If there was an answer, he'd find it there..."

Picture Title: Captain Tory

Caption: He swung his lantern three times and slowly the schooner appeared..."

Van, Allsburg Chris. The Mysteries of Harris Burdick. Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1984. Print.

Once you have chosen the image/caption you want to use, you will need to write down some ideas and brainstorm for your story.  Title it "Brainstorm: Mystery Story" and answer the following prompt: 

• What is the picture title and caption you have chosen to use? 
• Write a detailed description of the picture. Consider the setting you see, any potential characters you notice, and anything that stands out to you from the image. 
• Next, write any and all ideas you have for the story using the picture as inspiration. The ideas do not have to flow together at this point; you are just jotting down ideas for possibilities within the story.  Consider ideas for character(s), plot, and setting. 

Handouts from 9/28-10/2

"Strange Visitor"

Analysis of "Strange Visitor"

Writing a Story Lead

Identifying Plot, Conflict, and Setting

Roots Test 2

We will have our second Roots Test this Friday, 9/25/18.

Here is a link to the quizlet for this Roots Test.

Roots Test 2 Quizlet